范文講評：旅游事業(yè)
「要求」
要求：旅游事業(yè)對我國具有舉足輕重的作用。請以Ways to Improve China’s Tourism為題為我國旅游事業(yè)的發(fā)展提幾點(diǎn)建議。（提示：擴大宣傳，改善旅游設施，提高服務(wù)質(zhì)量……）
「范文」
Ways to Improve china’s tourism
Tourism is now becoming a major industry throughout the world. However，tourism in China is not as developed as it should be. If the following is done，China’s tourism will definitely be improved.
First，our places of interest should be better advertised throughout the world to attract more tourists. Second，facilities should be provided to ensure that tourists enjoy their trip. Finally，the quality of service should be improved.
Don’t tell people their ideas are bad unless you’ve got a good one.
「評語(yǔ)」
本文第一段提出問(wèn)題，第二段解決問(wèn)題，“first”，“second”，“finally”等詞的使用，使整篇文章條理格外清晰。
范文講評：如何利用空余時(shí)間
「要求」
題目：你將參加校園英語(yǔ)講演比賽?，F在需要寫(xiě)出一份簡(jiǎn)要的底稿，底稿應包含以下基本要點(diǎn)。
隨著(zhù)工作時(shí)間的縮短，空余時(shí)間越來(lái)越多了。
如何利用空余時(shí)間。
利用空余時(shí)間的益處。
題目自擬。
「范文」
Use of Free Time
Some people may be so busy that they never have a spare moment，but it would be hard to find such people in contemporary times. Working hours are shorter and vacations longer，and there are more and more ways to spend the weekends. Aside from eating and sleeping，what do people do during the many hours when they are not at work or at school？
Use of free time often discloses much about one’s tastes，values，interests and personality. What may be one man’s leisure，however，might be another man’s work. In leisure hours，some may turn to the humanities：literature，magic，art and here we might also mention movies and television. Others participate in sports，politics，voluntary work or hobbies at home. Still others like parties，travelling，or just loafing.
Obviously，the use of free time is a good means of relaxation，but its benefits go beyond this. All things people do in leisure hours enable them to gratify their wishes. This can contribute to intellectual growth and promote social activities as well.
So the good use of free time will make life rich，colorful and rewarding.
「評語(yǔ)」
這篇文章寫(xiě)得很有水平。說(shuō)理深入淺出，語(yǔ)言豐富曉暢，例證詳實(shí)，句式靈活多變，使得文章生動(dòng)并吸引人。開(kāi)篇用問(wèn)句，引出下文；結尾點(diǎn)題，總結全文。并且很有文學(xué)性。
范文講評：旅行
「要求」
暑假就要到了，許多同學(xué)都會(huì )選擇旅游作為度假的一種方式。的確，旅游對一個(gè)人的身心健康頗有好處。那么就請你以下面三句話(huà)分別作為三段段首的主題句，寫(xiě)一篇旅游的文章。
Travel is a very good means of broadening a person’s perspective.
Travel may relieve a person of boredom and gloom.
Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages.
「范文」
Travel
Travel is a very good means of broadening a person’s perspective. It makes you come into contact with different cultures，meet people of different colors and go through peculiar rites and ceremonies. Travelling much，you will not only enrich your knowledge and experiences，but also be aware of the vastness of nature.
Travel may also relieve person of boredom and gloom. Travel brings you enjoyment and attraction. It gives you a pleasant experience，which will disperse your boredom and make you forget whatever annoys you. Travel broadens your mind and leaves you good memories. Later，you may go over these memories and enjoy your past experiences，thus keeping a fresh and sunny mind.
The field’s his study，nature was his book.
Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages. Airplanes are the fastest but also the most expensive. Buses and trains are less expensive，but they soon make you feel cramped and uncomfortable. Ships provide you with comfort unless you get seasick. Most people can afford traveling by bicycle，which，although slow，can limber up your muscles and get you closer to nature.
「評語(yǔ)」
本文首先陳述了旅游能夠開(kāi)闊人們眼界的原因，接著(zhù)指出為什么旅游能夠消除煩悶、抑郁的心情，最后說(shuō)明進(jìn)行旅游可采取的不同交通工具的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)。本篇各段解釋言簡(jiǎn)意明，主題突出。“come into contact with…”，“enrich you knowledge and experiences”，“be aware of the vastness of nature”，“disperse your boredom”，“broaden your mind”等詞語(yǔ)的恰當搭配，生動(dòng)而準確地表現出了旅游的益處。
范文：大型企業(yè)和小型企業(yè) Large Companies and Small Companies
Directions：Write a composition on the topic Large Companies and Small Companies in thirty minutes. You should write no less than 120 words and base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese）below.
1.大學(xué)畢業(yè)后有的人希望在大公司工作。
2.有的人則認為在小公司工作更能鍛煉人。
3.我的看法。
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Large Companies and Small Companies
Upon graduation from college，young men and women face the first choice in their career life：to go to a large company or a small one？ Although many graduates are attracted by the prestige of large companies，I believe the small one will afford more chances of success and more opportunities to develop your ability.
There are two basic differences between the large and small enterprises.
First，working in the small company you operate primarily through personal contacts；you have more chance to develop your communication ability and the ability to handle various kinds of personalities. In contrast，in the large company there are established policies and fairly rigid procedures. Even the man at the top is only a cog in a big machine： you needn’t make any decision and can’t see the effect of your work……
Second，in a small business you are normally exposed to all kinds of experiences and expected to do a great many things without too much help or guidance. Thus，you may acquire much more skills and experience，and develop the ability to handle different，complicated things. But in the large corporation，since you are normally taught one thing and limited to one procedure，you may become the man who knows more and more about less and less.
Obviously if you want to gain more experience and ability needed in business organizations and to become an excellent manager or executive in your future career，working in a small company is your best choice.
