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寫(xiě)前輸入：
1） 用于按空間展開(kāi)的段落之中的連接詞和過(guò)渡詞有：
above in front of in the centre of on the left
across below in the distance on the right
beyond nearby opposite to over
also further next to on top of
up down close to beneath
under around near to along
2）有關(guān)地點(diǎn)說(shuō)明文應該著(zhù)重掌握面積﹑ 人口﹑ 位置﹑ 環(huán)境﹑ 今昔對比等。以城市為例：（請仔細體會(huì )下面的句子的精彩之處）
1．Our city covers … square kilometers
2．Our city has an area of …square kilometers
3．The size of our city is ... square kilometers
4．The population of our city is…
5．Our city has a population of …
6．Our city is located in…,
7．It is very convenient for you to come to our city…
8．You can take a bus, a train or a plane to….
9．The best way to experience… is to take a bus tour.
10．It takes … to take a bus from… to…
11．… is only a few bus stops from downtown.
12．… is within easy reach.
13．The city stretches itself lazily along…..
14．The city is well-known/famous for its…/as…
15．The city offers …..and a variety of …
16．Wherever you go, there are plenty of activities to choose from.
17．You can go on the city tours to enjoy the sights, taste the local food, explore the lively nightlife and learn about its history and culture.
18．If you are interested in …, you can…. If you prefer…, you can…
19．After exploring …, you can relax and enjoy a good meal in…
20．There’re … where visitors can find shade from the hot sun and a moment’s rest from the busy city.
21．A walk around …is a feast for the mind as well as the eye.
22．The city is home to …
23．The city treats visitors to (blue seas)…
24．… is a must-see for tourists, as……
25．The city, known as…, attracts millions of visitors from all over the world.
26．…may explain why people spend so much time on trips to …
27．… reminds visitors that it is an important…
28．You are sure to have a wonderful time in….
29．Few visitors leave the city feeling disappointed.
教師點(diǎn)撥
3) 近幾年的高考書(shū)面表達已經(jīng)提高了能力的要求，鼓勵考生多使用高級詞匯和復雜句型，這樣可以直接影響高考書(shū)面表達的得分檔次。不過(guò)，如果考生是因嘗試高級詞匯和復雜句型出現的少量錯誤可以不扣分。同學(xué)們應該學(xué)會(huì )使用分詞短語(yǔ)﹑with復合結構 ﹑定語(yǔ)從句﹑ 強調句型﹑ 感嘆句 ﹑倒裝句和it作形式主語(yǔ)等復雜句型。具體的地說(shuō)有：
As we can see , …
It is well-known to us all that…
It is∕was… who∕that…
It is∕was ＋adj.∕n.＋ for ∕of sb. to do sth.
so …that … too … to …
with ＋n.∕ prep.∕v-ing.∕v-ed., ……
How ＋adj.∕adv.＋subject＋be! What＋adj.＋n.＋subject＋be!
因此，只要考生準確地使用了以上這些高級詞匯和復雜句型，就一定會(huì )增強文章的表達效果，也就一定能在高考英語(yǔ)的書(shū)面表達中獲得較為理想的成績(jì)。
范文欣賞與學(xué)習
范文1：江蘇卷2004假如你是李曉華，住在江城。你的加拿大筆友Bob來(lái)信談到他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家鄉江城的情況。請你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封回信?；匦彭毎ū碇械膬热?
自然情況 位于長(cháng)江邊、風(fēng)景優(yōu)美、適合居住
成就 經(jīng)濟發(fā)展迅速，新建了不少工廠(chǎng)、住房、道路
存在問(wèn)題 水、空氣污染，交通擁擠
對江城發(fā)展的看法 (內容由考生自己擬定)
注意: 1. 回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名。
2. 詞數120左右。信的開(kāi)頭與結尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計入總詞數。
3. 參考詞匯:經(jīng)濟economy n.
Dear Bob,
It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.
The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.
In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we’ll have a better hometown in future.
Yours,
Xiao Hua
范文2：全國卷2006（I） 假定你是李華。應英國朋友Bob的要求，寫(xiě)一封短信介紹你校圖書(shū)館的基本情況。內容須包括下面兩幅圖中的相關(guān)信息。
注意：1.詞數100左右; 2.可以適當增減細節，以使行文連貫; 3.開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。
June 8
Dear Bob,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. ____________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
內容要點(diǎn)：
1.圖書(shū)館的位置：前有花園，后有教學(xué)樓
2.內部環(huán)境：寬敞、有書(shū)架、報刊、書(shū)籍等
3.圖書(shū)館功能：借閱、借閱數量和借期
4.開(kāi)放時(shí)間
5.合適的結尾
June 8
Dear Bob,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.
Our library is in the center of the school. There is a beautiful garden in front of it and our classroom building is right behind it. The library is big. When you get inside, you will see many shelves full of books on different subjects. There are also lots of newspapers and magazines. We borrow books and do some reading in the library. According to the rule, every student can borrow up to 5 books each time and keep them for 10 days. It is open from 9 a.m. to 7 p.m. from Monday to Friday and closed on weekends.
We all like our library very much.
Best wishes.
Li Hua
四川卷2006 假設你是李華，你的新西蘭筆友Nick 將于八月來(lái)四川旅游，特來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)有關(guān)旅游景點(diǎn)情況。請根據下表所提供的要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一封回信，并表示盼望他的到來(lái)。
旅游資源 許多世界著(zhù)名的風(fēng)景名勝，如：
九寨溝（海子；清澈見(jiàn)底；色彩斑斕）
都江堰水利工程（2，000多年歷史；仍在發(fā)揮作用）
相關(guān)信息 氣候適宜，交通方便
注意： 1.詞數100左右，信的格式及開(kāi)頭以為你寫(xiě)好（不記入總詞數）。
2.可根據內容要點(diǎn)適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
3.參考詞匯：省份—province 海子—lake 都江堰水利工程—Dujiangyan Irrigation Project
Dear Nick,
I'm glad to hear that you're coming to Sichuan in August._________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
應試技巧點(diǎn)撥
1. 首先要認真審題。讀懂題目所給信息，初步確定要點(diǎn)內容，并可用序號標出以免遺忘。
2. 列提綱，使要點(diǎn)條理化，統籌安排布局。
3. 勿要直譯，需意譯。尤其對看圖情景作文要構建完整故事結構，不可逐句羅列了事。
4. 要刻意把好語(yǔ)言關(guān)。要用自己最熟悉的句型結構和詞語(yǔ)，力求文理通順，語(yǔ)言準確。沒(méi)有把握的詞句不要寫(xiě)，確有把握的可以錦上添花。
5. 遇到一時(shí)想不起的詞語(yǔ)，需變通?？梢杂猛x近義詞代替，也可以用否定詞加反義詞來(lái)表達，亦可變換句式。不可鉆牛角尖，更不能生造詞語(yǔ)，漢化表達。
6. 注意文章的長(cháng)度?？淳唧w內容而定，如果內容多應多用復雜句式，如果內容不多，為了達到詞的限數應多用簡(jiǎn)單句式，并適當增補合理內容。
7. 注意保持卷面整潔，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)的好壞會(huì )直接影響閱卷老師的情緒。
8. 最后注意復查全文: 看內容要點(diǎn)有無(wú)遺漏，標點(diǎn)、格式、大小寫(xiě)、漢語(yǔ)拼音是否規范，是否有語(yǔ)病等。
書(shū)面表達中學(xué)生常見(jiàn)錯誤類(lèi)型
一 要點(diǎn)散亂型——不著(zhù)邊際胡亂寫(xiě)；
二 邏輯混亂型——多出現在語(yǔ)句或情節描繪中；
三 語(yǔ)法不通型——一般出現在語(yǔ)句中；
四 誤用詞語(yǔ)型——語(yǔ)句中用詞錯誤
五 粗心大意型——不認真閱讀提示，或錯寫(xiě)內容或丟三落四
六 喧賓奪主型——不分主次信馬由韁丟掉主要內容而將非主要內容大寫(xiě)或特寫(xiě)
李華父親的朋友陳偉是在美國居住多年的華裔。因陳偉的兒子陳小明明年要來(lái)大陸李華學(xué)校學(xué)漢語(yǔ)，陳小明來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)學(xué)校情況，以下是小華回信的內容。
1．聽(tīng)說(shuō)你明年來(lái)我校學(xué)習，我們很高興。
2．我校是一所具有80年歷史的老學(xué)校。
3．學(xué)校很美，有許多花草樹(shù)木，兩座教學(xué)大樓，一座宿舍樓。
4．學(xué)校設備優(yōu)良，有體育館、計算機室和大圖書(shū)館等。學(xué)生除正式課程外，還有許多選修課，如：油畫(huà)、打字、烹調等。
5．最重要的是，學(xué)校有許多優(yōu)秀教師，課程有趣，老師既有知識又和藹，非常愿意幫助我們，我愛(ài)我們的學(xué)校，我真希望你也能喜歡我們的學(xué)校。
參考詞匯：選修課：elective 體育館：gym 宿舍樓：dormitory building
Dear Xiao Ming,
I was excited to hear that you will come to learn Chinese in our school. Now let me tell you something about our school. Our school campus is beautiful. It has many trees, flowers and a lot of grass. We have two very nice teaching buildings and a dormitory building. In addition, the school has excellent equipment, such as a new gym, a computer room and a large library. There are also a lot of electives to choose from, such as painting, typing and cooking. Above all, there are many excellent teachers in our school. Classes are interesting, the teachers are kind and knowledgeable and willing to help the students. I like our school. I hope you will like our school too.
Yours
Li Hua
