To help students to express themselves in the argumentative writing.
To develop the students’abilities of applying the writing structure on other topics.
Play the video.
Ask what the main idea is.
Introduce more ways of study.
Introduce some new words.
Watch the video.
Say the key words in the video.
Think about other ways of study.
Learn the new words.
To help students have a better understanding of the passage.
To help students grasp the structure of the passage.
To develop students’dialectical mind.
Check if students understand the passage through fast reading and detailed reading.
Ask students to find the main idea of the passage and each paragraph.
Let students find the advantages and disadvantages of study on the Internet.
Ask students to guess the content of paragraph 4 and show the original text after discussion.
Let Students to give the title of the passage.
Match four paragraphs with their main ideas.
Work in pairs.
To Help students understand the structure of the passage by drawing a picture.
Lead Students to find the connective words, such as to begin with, what's more, last but not least, however, in addition, finally.
Group the students and ask each group to write a passage about another topic by using the given structure.
Help students do a group writing and let each student write one part of the passage.
Invite several groups to present their passages and other students give comments on their performance.
Work on the task according to the task descriptions in groups.
Some present the passages in class and others listen carefully and give comments.
Task Paper
反復學(xué)習高老師的教學(xué)設計,收獲很多。
Warming-up and leading-in環(huán)節中,教師通過(guò)放視頻使學(xué)生,引導學(xué)生抓關(guān)鍵詞,通過(guò)師生交流、學(xué)習新詞,為有效學(xué)習文本學(xué)習做好鋪墊。學(xué)生多感官參與學(xué)習,有“watch,think,say and learn”確保了學(xué)習的有效性。
Reading環(huán)節活動(dòng)設計層層遞進(jìn),體現了學(xué)生思維參與的深度,保證了學(xué)習的有效性,學(xué)習方法的有效滲透。此環(huán)節通過(guò)學(xué)生速讀抓主要信息,細讀找段落大意,Pairwork發(fā)現advantages,disadvantages,猜出第四段內容,最后給出文本題目。層層遞進(jìn)的活動(dòng)設計和閱讀策略的滲透,加上全員參與,為有效學(xué)習提供了保障。
Group writing環(huán)節是輸出活動(dòng)。學(xué)生基于任務(wù)進(jìn)行小組活動(dòng),共同完成一個(gè)passage。寫(xiě),作為輸出活動(dòng),在此做到了人人參與。既有人人一句的寫(xiě)作,還有真實(shí)的學(xué)習展示交流,更有學(xué)生之間的互評,這是有效的、真實(shí)的學(xué)習交流,是很好的輸出。另外,仔細閱讀張老師和高老師的交流,我又學(xué)到很多。
非常同意各位老師對于教學(xué)目標、教學(xué)材料、教學(xué)活動(dòng)的討論,相同觀(guān)點(diǎn)我不再重復。我基于Dale的經(jīng)驗之錐分析高超老師課例中的學(xué)生學(xué)習活動(dòng)。
高老師一開(kāi)始用視頻導入,這是對所看內容掌握率30%的watch video活動(dòng),作為導入活動(dòng),效果不錯。
然后是閱讀活動(dòng),這是閱讀課,必須有這個(gè)環(huán)節,盡管學(xué)生對所讀內容的掌握率只有10%,還在讀的過(guò)程中有兩人一組的討論,而且有填入語(yǔ)句,這是有效率70%的hands-on,對前面的閱讀是一個(gè)補充,遺憾的是,動(dòng)手時(shí)間較短。
然后是在老師引導下完成文章結構圖分析,這是對所聽(tīng)所看掌握率50%的attend an exhibit和watch a demo(看老師完成結構圖)。
之后是對所做內容掌握率達到90%的Model a real experience。
所以整節課效率非常高。這節課我在現場(chǎng)觀(guān)摩學(xué)習,看到學(xué)生都能寫(xiě)出與范文結構一致的文章,達到學(xué)習所讀文章結構進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作的讀寫(xiě)目標。
但較為遺憾的是,這個(gè)寫(xiě)作活動(dòng)的范文的“典范”性不夠。這樣,盡管學(xué)習活動(dòng)很有效,但學(xué)習的范本不夠典范,導致學(xué)習成效不是很高,就像學(xué)生跟我學(xué)打籃球一樣,即使學(xué)習活動(dòng)再有效,成效也不會(huì )很高;而跟姚明學(xué)打籃球,即使學(xué)習活動(dòng)效率不是很高,但成效依然會(huì )很高。
所以,這節課如果需要調整,需要調整的不是學(xué)習活動(dòng),而是文本選擇。
當然,基于現有文本,也可以開(kāi)展有控制的教學(xué)。從現有文本出發(fā),我有一個(gè)與高老師略微不同的教學(xué)設計,主要是分散閱讀時(shí)間,穿插有效性較高的hands-on活動(dòng)在閱讀之中,從而提高對寫(xiě)作技能的掌握率(這里不是培養閱讀能力,而是培訓寫(xiě)作能力):
當然,我的這一設計顯得太樸實(shí),若是需要,可以使用計算機技術(shù)等加以?xún)?yōu)化。
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