考六級的同學(xué)注意了，新東方老師真出汗，教你作文得滿(mǎn)分，六級突破630 2010-03-24 10:20 | (分類(lèi):-CET4 & CET6)
n 1.審題
n 2.構思
n 段首句；舉例。
n 3.動(dòng)筆
n 4.檢查
n 1.三段論；
n 2.文章開(kāi)頭盡量避免錯誤；
n 3.寫(xiě)好第二段基本層次結構；
n 4.多運用關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)；
n 5.不能說(shuō)空話(huà)，要舉例子。
n 例文評分。
n 1.六級作文不要亂喊口號
n We must be honest and faithful to our classmates, party, country and the whole world .
n 2.文章內容要展開(kāi)，注意舉例子和分析原因。
n （1）舉例子
n （2）分析原因
n （3）萬(wàn)不得已湊字數
n 1.The methodology suggested may not guarantee the ultimate success, but the eventual pay-off could be worth the effort.
n 2. Achieving even partial success will benefit mankind and contribute to creating a better world.
n 1.大量看范文。
n 2.關(guān)注段首句的寫(xiě)法和舉例子的寫(xiě)法。
n 3.適當的練習。
n 1.大量看范文。
n 2.關(guān)注段首句的寫(xiě)法和舉例子的寫(xiě)法。
n 3.適當的練習。
n 1.開(kāi)頭直接切入正題。
n 2.議論文第二段的主題句要寫(xiě)好。
n 3.第二段要分層次展開(kāi)。
n 4.用名言、舉例、解釋等手段充實(shí)第二段內容。
n 5.結尾要干脆有力。
n 第一段：起始段。
n 第二段：展開(kāi)段。
n 第三段：結論段。
n 第一段：引出現象或引出話(huà)題。
n 引出現象——闡述題；
n 引出話(huà)題——觀(guān)點(diǎn)對立題。
n 現象 phenomenon；
n 話(huà)題 issue。
n 模版句1：
n People in growing numbers have become increasingly aware of the seriousness of the phenomenon.
n 模版句2：
n There is a growing concern over the seriousness of the phenomenon.
n 舉例(03.12)： the waste on campus
n There is a growing concern over the seriousness of the waste on campus.
n People in growing numbers have become increasingly aware of the seriousness of the waste on campus
n 模版句：
n Whether something should or should not be done is a much debated problem in that it affects many people (in their everyday life).
n 舉例(2000.6)：
n Whether the test of speaking English should or should not be taken is a much debated problem in that it affects many university students.
n 舉例(97.6)：
n Whether job-hopping should or should not be done is a much debated problem in that it affects many people.
n 正方觀(guān)點(diǎn)：
n Some people argue that
n 反方觀(guān)點(diǎn)：
n Others, on the contrary, claim that
n 正方觀(guān)點(diǎn)（97.6）：
n Some people argue that doing one job does good to one’s career development.
n 反方觀(guān)點(diǎn)：
Others, on the contrary, claim that job-hopping helps one acquire wide scope of knowledge and accumulate more work experience.
n 我的觀(guān)點(diǎn)：
n Careful consideration leads me to believe that
n I tend to think that…
n It seems to me that…
n I am of the opinion that…
n I would take view that…
n 第二段主題句：
n The explanation for this phenomenon may include several factors and I will express only a few of the most important ones.
n The reason why I cannot accept the job offered may include several factors and I will express only a few of the most important ones.
n 三個(gè)層次：
n first of all;
n in addition;
n furthermore.
n first and foremost,
n besides,
n last but not least
n In the first place
n In the second place
n In the third place
n 個(gè)人層面
n 1.個(gè)人的興趣愛(ài)好
n Doing something is of great interest, for it adds color to the dull routine of everyday life.
n （02.6）A great many university students are fond of surfing online.
n Surfing online is of great interest, for it adds color to the dull routine of everyday life.
n As a result, a great many university students indulge themselves in the internet.
n 2.豐富/提高生活質(zhì)量
n Something helps to improve the quality of people’s lives.
n 例：The use of private cars helps to improve the quality of people’s lives.
n 3.運動(dòng)健身
n Regular exercises benefit both the body and mind.
n 4.社會(huì )責任感
n Doing something will develop one’s strong sense of duty.
n 5.參加活動(dòng)，培養團隊合作精神
n Participating in activities can develop a sense of team spirit and cooperation.
n 6.人際關(guān)系
n Doing something will enhance mutual understanding.
n 例：Talking with my roommates will enhance mutual understanding.
n 7.個(gè)人能力和職業(yè)發(fā)展
n Doing something will develop one’s capability and helps one to start a new career.
n 例：Working hard will develop one’s capability and helps one to start a new career.
n Getting proper training will develop one’s capability and helps one to start a new career.
n 例：Working hard will develop one’s capability and helps one to start a new career.
n Getting proper training will develop one’s capability and helps one to start a new career.
n 社會(huì )層面
n 1.促進(jìn)經(jīng)濟發(fā)展
n It helps to improve the economic strength. 。
n 例：The recent policy helps to improve the economic strength.
n 2.自然和社會(huì )資源
n It will lead to great extravagance of natural resources and social resources.
n 例：Clear cutting will lead to great extravagance of natural resources.
n 3.科技發(fā)展
n It is a symbol of human progress and it extends the scope of human thinking.
n 例：The development of science and technology is a symbol of human progress and it extends the scope of human thinking。
n 4、交通
n Too many cars running on the streets lead to air pollution and noise pollution.
n 5.教育
n 好處之一：Get oneself acquainted with the latest development in science and technology.
n 好處之二：Broaden one’s scope of knowledge.
n 6.旅游
n The tourist industry has played an important role in meeting the cultural needs of the public and carrying forward national culture.
n 7.綜合狀況
n The progress of our society is based on harmony.
基本思路：
主題句+解釋+舉例（進(jìn)一步拓展延伸）
n Topic:
n Some people suggest that the government should invest a small amount of money, others think the museum is a financial burden? What do you think of it?
n 主題句：
n 一個(gè)東西給我們帶來(lái)的好處，對我們產(chǎn)生的影響，或人們普遍的對這一事物的看法。
n 主題句舉例：
n 博物館可以記錄國家的歷史
n 1. Museums play an essential role in recording a country’s history.
n 1. Admittedly, museums, of course, play an essential role in recording a country’s history.
n 對主題句解釋?zhuān)?/span>
n 博物館有很多代表一個(gè)國家過(guò)去的藝術(shù)品。
n 2. Museums usually have great collections of artistic objects which are the symbols of a country’s glorious past.
n 2.As is known to the world, museums usually have great collections of artistic objects which are the symbols of a country’s glorious past.
n 舉例：
n 故宮博物館里有很多文物。
n 3. For example, the Forbidden City Museum has a collection of antiques.
n 3. For example, the Forbidden City Museum has a huge collection of delicate antiques of artistic and historical value.
n 進(jìn)一步拓展：Museum對人們的影響
n 影響之一：通過(guò)參觀(guān)博物館，人們可以學(xué)到關(guān)于歷史和文化的東西。
n 4. By visiting museums, we can learn a lot about our history and culture.
n 4. It is widely acknowledged that we can learn a lot about our history and culture by visiting museums in our leisure time.
n It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.
n It is universally acknowledged that…
n It is well accepted that…
n It is widely believed that
n It is generally maintained that…
n 繼續引申：
n 有很多好處，例如可以完善人格.
n 5. A clear understanding of our history and culture does good to the development of well-rounded character.
n 5.It is a clear understanding of our history and culture that does good to the development of well-rounded character.
n 2006.12 首次英語(yǔ)新6級作文題——The Importance of Reading Classics（ 閱讀經(jīng)典的重要性）
n 提綱：1.閱讀經(jīng)典對人的成長(cháng)至關(guān)重要；
n 2.人們越來(lái)越少地閱讀經(jīng)典，原因是……
n 3.作為大學(xué)生，你應該怎么做。
n 主題句：
n 1. There are a lot of reasons for it.
n 理由之一：學(xué)生缺乏興趣·內容過(guò)時(shí)
n 2. In the first place, many college students take no interest in reading classics, for they find classics outdated.
n 理由一的延伸：
n 3. In other words, classics do not meet with their requirement of reading.
n 理由二：學(xué)生太忙，沒(méi)時(shí)間閱讀經(jīng)典著(zhù)作
n 4. In the second place, nowadays ,many university students are occupied from morning till night.
n 5. As a result, it is quite difficult for them to squeeze some time to read classics.
n 理由二的延伸：
n 6. Since many students dedicate themselves to studying the course work, they pay no attention to reading classics.
n 理由三：經(jīng)典著(zhù)作比較深奧，讓人疲憊厭倦
n 7. In the third place, the contents of classics are usually filled with abstruse concepts and ideas.
n 理由三的延伸：
n 8. Therefore, college students invariably feel tired and bored in the process of reading.
n 總結段落結構：8句話(huà)構成整個(gè)第二段
n ①主題句
n ②理由一
n ③理由一的延伸
n ④理由二
n ⑤理由二的延伸
n ⑥理由二的進(jìn)一步解釋
n ⑦理由三
n ⑧理由三的延伸
n ①improve people’s living standards
n ②increase the government revenue
n ③improve the image of our country
n ④increase reputation and upgrade the status in the international community
n ⑤enhance mutual understanding
n ⑥play an educational role
n ⑦maintain world peace
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